Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

[pugachev stanislav]

Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте! Тема реферата "Нейтронные звезды как детекторы скрытой массы".

[Maxim Khlopov]

Thank you, I look forward to your first draft

[pugachev stanislav]

Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте! Извините, что не появился на зачетной неделе. У меня не готов реферат, здесь даже не сырой вариант.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Stanislav,
I can conditionally admit you to exam, but I think you understand yourself that the current level of your text can hardly provide you to pretend even on satisfactory mark, therefore further work on your text is necessary to improve the situation.
I confirm my ability to continue meetings at our regular Thursday time all the Thursdays before the exam and you are welcome to use this occasion to discuss the progress of your text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[pugachev stanislav]

Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте! Реферат сделал, извините, что настолько его задержал.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Stanislav,
Thank you. Unfortunately, we have no time for detailed improvement - I could only briefly look through your text and put some comments in the attached file.
There are many grammatic and stillistic errors marked yellow. You missed several mportant features of NS as DM detector - namely annihilation of captured DM inside NS and NS conversion into BH owing to DM capture.
Calculation of relativistic effects is of not much sense, since the problem is basically nonrelativistic - so you should make the conclusion, how essental these effects are
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

Record of exam of Pugachev Stanislav

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