Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

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Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby pugachev stanislav on Wed 20 Oct 2021 13:32

Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте! Тема реферата "Нейтронные звезды как детекторы скрытой массы".
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Re: Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Thu 21 Oct 2021 14:04

Thank you, I look forward to your first draft
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Re: Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby pugachev stanislav on Fri 24 Dec 2021 15:16

Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте! Извините, что не появился на зачетной неделе. У меня не готов реферат, здесь даже не сырой вариант.
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Re: Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 24 Dec 2021 16:23

Dear Stanislav,
I can conditionally admit you to exam, but I think you understand yourself that the current level of your text can hardly provide you to pretend even on satisfactory mark, therefore further work on your text is necessary to improve the situation.
I confirm my ability to continue meetings at our regular Thursday time all the Thursdays before the exam and you are welcome to use this occasion to discuss the progress of your text
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Re: Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby pugachev stanislav on Wed 19 Jan 2022 19:55

Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте! Реферат сделал, извините, что настолько его задержал.
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Re: Referat and exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 19 Jan 2022 23:17

Dear Stanislav,
Thank you. Unfortunately, we have no time for detailed improvement - I could only briefly look through your text and put some comments in the attached file.
There are many grammatic and stillistic errors marked yellow. You missed several mportant features of NS as DM detector - namely annihilation of captured DM inside NS and NS conversion into BH owing to DM capture.
Calculation of relativistic effects is of not much sense, since the problem is basically nonrelativistic - so you should make the conclusion, how essental these effects are
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Exam of Pugachev Stanislav

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 28 Jan 2022 15:43

Record of exam of Pugachev Stanislav
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