Referat and Exam of Eisen Nikiforov

[Eisen Nikiforov]

Dear Mr. Khlopov,

I chose the topic: " Model of Horizontal Unification – problem of low scale solution"

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Eisen,
I look forward to your first draft of text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Eisen Nikiforov]

Добрый вечер. Извините, что скидываю поздно. Вот первый вариант реферата, я еще дописываю сейчас. Потом в ближайшее время еще пришлю.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Eisen,
Thank you. My comments are in the attached file - stylistic errors are marked, misprints and grammatical errors are simply underlined. You should cut general discussion of horizontal unification and concentrate on the specific low energy solution and its problems.
You should pass several iterations before I can let you present your referat at the admission session planned on 27 of December. To plan my work on your text I must know, whether you plan attend my course in the 2 semester.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

On 27 of December referat was presented

Admitted to exam with recommendation to improve the text to pretend on high mark

[Eisen Nikiforov]

Добрый вечер. Попытался исправить и дополнить реферат.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Eisen,
Thank you. Unfortunately, we have no time for further improvement of your text.
To have a chance to pretend on highest mark, please prepare an answer to additional question at tomorrow's exam:

What is the specifics of primordial archion component in the low scale horizontal unification?

See you tomorrow
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

Record of exam

The mark was 3/5