by Maxim Khlopov on Thu 28 Dec 2017 18:48
Dear Elizaveta,
My comments are in the attached file. I have noticed with regret that some of my previous comments were not taken into account. All the papers, mentioned in text must be in the Bibliography. References should be in the proper form: journal, volume, pages. One simply cannot read Section 6 - it should be edited properly after Google translation.
To plan my successive work on your text I must know, whether you plan to attend my course in the 2 semester.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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[i]Хлопов Максим Юрьевич
Maxim Khlopov[/i]