Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

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Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Esipova_E_MEPhI on Mon 19 Oct 2015 13:48

Здравствуйте.
Я выбрала тему первичных черных дыр.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 19 Oct 2015 15:13

Thank you.
I look forward to the first draft
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:21

I must put marks of the intermediate control.
As I told you, I can put 3 for the chosen title, but to get higher mark I need
at least a first draft of referat.
I can wait until early next week for that
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Esipova_E_MEPhI on Mon 11 Jan 2016 18:03

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Выкладываю первую версию своего реферата. В архиве лежит tex-файл для более удобной для Вас правки текста.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 11 Jan 2016 23:04

Dear Ekaterina,
Thank you, it's a good first approximation
It's regrettful that we didn't start the work on your text two months ago.
My principal comments:
you miss
- expression for the probability of direct PBH formation on p=0 stage
- formation of supermassive PBHs from collapse of closed walls
I can recommend you to use my review
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Primordial Black Holes. Res.Astron.Astrophys. (2010) V. 10, PP. 495-528,
e-Print: arXiv:arXiv:0801.0116
for a further extension of your text.
As soon as you add these points, we can discuss the details of your text
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 15 Jan 2016 15:39

To plan our further work on the text, I also need the information, whether you plan to attend my course in the 2 semester
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Esipova_E_MEPhI on Sun 17 Jan 2016 02:19

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Я добавила в реферат то, что Вы сказали. Спасибо большое за статью.
Касательно следующего семестра: да, я планирую продолжить слушать ваш курс.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Esipova_E_MEPhI on Mon 18 Jan 2016 21:28

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Хотелось получить какой-то отзыв на последнюю версию реферата.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 19 Jan 2016 12:57

Dear Ekaterina,
I repeat that our work would be much more effective, if you start it two months earlier.
You can find my comments in the attached file.
Please correct and send me the final Russian version of your referat to get admission to exam.
Since you plan to attend my course in the 2 semester, we can continue to work on your text, which should be presented in English to pass the exam in the 2 semester.
The specifics of the 2 semester is
-The course is given in English
-The referat should be presented in English
-The course is accomplished by several lectures on astroparticle physics by Prof. D.Semikoz
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Re: Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

New postby Esipova_E_MEPhI on Tue 19 Jan 2016 19:14

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Высылаю версию реферата с учтенными вашими последними замечаниями.
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