Referat and Exam

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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 21 Apr 2014 14:11

Dear Kirill,
Thank you for your first draft of English text, which certainly should be improved.
I have underlined some expressions in the beginning of your text to be corrected and I hope that you improve your English in the next version
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Кирилл Климков МИФИ on Mon 5 May 2014 18:00

Hello, Maxim Yurievich.

Sending the topic with the corrected references.

Yours faithfully, Kirill.
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 7 May 2014 20:07

Dear Kirill,
My comments are in the attached file.
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Кирилл Климков МИФИ on Thu 8 May 2014 14:17

Good day.

This is my next version of topic.

Regards, Kirill.
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 11 May 2014 19:22

Dear Kirill,
My comments and corrections are in the attached file.
Please correct all the underlined expressions and terms.
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Кирилл Климков МИФИ on Sun 11 May 2014 23:08

Hello, Maxim Yu.

Sending correct version of my topic. Also sending pdf-version to solve display numbers in the list of references.

Regards, Kirill.
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 12 May 2014 14:03

Dear Kirill,
Please, correct all the underlined expressions and terms. Please check grammar and don't forget verbs in sentences.
My corrections and comments are in the attached fie.
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Кирилл Климков МИФИ on Mon 12 May 2014 20:21

Dear Maxim Yu.,

This is the next corrected version of referat.

Regards, Kirill
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Re: Referat and Exam

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 13 May 2014 10:59

Dear Kirill,
I think that now we can stop improvement of your text, since we have no time for it.
So, you as all the other students are admitted to exam, but I reserve a possibility to ask additional questions on referat, if there are still some questions that are not clarified in its current version.
The consultation for my exam will be tomorrow, Wednesday 14 May at 10.30 Moscow time.
See you all soon
With the best regards
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