by Maxim Khlopov on Tue 5 Nov 2013 13:02
Dear Nikita,
Thank you for draft.
I can read pdf file, but it isn't possible to put any comment in the text.
General comments:
1.Please use more academic and not popular science style
2.Please check and correct missprints
3. In inflationary models you don't have GUT era, you have inflation and then heating up to the temperatures, which are much smaller than GUT scale. In fact your model doesn't give physical basis for inflation, so you can remove the subsections about very early Uncverse, but just mention that you accept the picture in which inflation and baryosynthesis are explained by some other mechanisms beyond your physics (but you should make an assumption about the baryon excess).
4. In the expanding Universe the abundance of free p is small, but nonzero. Please calculate th eproton abundance form the condition of freezing out of p+n reaction
5. Please use Weizsäcker-Williams approximate formula for nucleon binding energy in nuclei and find for which nuclei positron decays are possible in your model
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
[i]Хлопов Максим Юрьевич
Maxim Khlopov[/i]