by Maxim Khlopov on Tue 6 Nov 2012 16:47
Dear Lyuba,
Thank you for draft.
I cannot put my extensive comments in your pdf file, therefore, I can give you only brief remarks:
1. There should be few general sentences in Introduction, before you discuss the problems, which supesymmetry can solve. It would be useful to discuss not only MSSM, but also mention differnt types of nonminimal SUSY models.
2. Before Inflation and baryosynthesis it would be useful to describe physics, which provides their mechanisms
3. After Inflation and baryosynthesis you can mention possible probes for their mechanisms (my tomorrow's lecture can be helpful)
4. Please correct missprints in the text (missed letters in some words)
5. When you discuss axino effects of axions should be also mentioned
6. It would be better to change the title
Экспериментальное ограничение суперсимметрии.
by Космомикрофизика суперсимметричных моделей and to stipulate the combination of physical, astrophysical and cosmological methods of its probes. Recent results of SUSY searches at LHC should be discussed.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
[i]Хлопов Максим Юрьевич
Maxim Khlopov[/i]