by Maxim Khlopov on Wed 19 Jan 2022 23:17
Dear Stanislav,
Thank you. Unfortunately, we have no time for detailed improvement - I could only briefly look through your text and put some comments in the attached file.
There are many grammatic and stillistic errors marked yellow. You missed several mportant features of NS as DM detector - namely annihilation of captured DM inside NS and NS conversion into BH owing to DM capture.
Calculation of relativistic effects is of not much sense, since the problem is basically nonrelativistic - so you should make the conclusion, how essental these effects are
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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детектор скрытой массы MK.pdf
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[i]Хлопов Максим Юрьевич
Maxim Khlopov[/i]