Astroparticle Physics Forum COSMOVIA

Dear Anastasia,
Please correct Bibliography (marked yellow in the attached file), put: for journals Volume, pages, year; for books Editor, Publisher, place year.
and send me corrected version before you send to referee
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Добрый вечер, исправила замечания

Dear Anastasia,
Thank you. You can send it to referee, after the last correction: put initials and correct name of Zeldovich. Must be:
[18] Zeldovich, Ya.B., Novikov I.D. The Hypothesis of Cores Retarded During Expansion
and the Hot Cosmological Model //Soviet Astronomy, Vol.10(1966), P. 602.
I need your advice: I have the feeling that, if I ask 4 for you, it will be accepted by committee and I am afraid that if I ask for 5, the committee will not support it.
Therefore, everything depends on your feeling: if you feel yourself sufficiently strong to stand defense and be able to prove my recommendation, I'll recommend to put you 5 in my supervisor's report
I look forward to your opinion
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Рекомендуйте отл. Я буду бороться за 5. Если облажаюсь-будет уроком. Но для меня важнее рост и пусть он на защите будет заключаться в том, что в этот раз я получу вопросы сложнее и их будет больше по количеству.

Dear Anastasia,
Well let's try. You can make a test of your presentation tomorrow at my VIA seminar (at14.30 MT as usual)
Good luck!
If you have corrected reference to Zeldovich and Novikov you can send the final version of your diplom to the referee
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Here is the record of our discussion of 22.10.2020 on the text of our article to be published in Bled Workshops in Physics

and the record of another discussion

The record of VIA discussion of 17.02.2021

Record of NIRS topic discussion of 18.05.2022

Dear MYu, here is my report for tomorrow.
Presentation will be later

Dear Anastasia,
For the moment presentation is more important, so I didn't put all the comments to your text but marked some specific examples, which would be helpful for proper editing of diplom.
See you today at 8.00 Moscow time to check your presentation
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov