by Maxim Khlopov on Thu 2 Nov 2017 14:04
Dear Alexey,
My comments are in the attached file. I strongly recommend you to restrict your model by only one family, since you have a lot of interesting features, even in this limited case: n/p ratio determined by pion exchange reactions, formation of structure with scale determined by mirror helium recombination - are crucial points for your scenario and should be properly studied.
Your intermediate control mark is 3 and you must signficantly improve your text at least addressing the two above questions to pretend on much higher mark at the exam
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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Maxim Khlopov[/i]