Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

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Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby GornayaJulia_MEPhI on Thu 14 Sep 2017 09:11

Dear Maxim Yu,,
I would like to choose the topic for the essay - SUSY(supersymmetry)
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Thu 14 Sep 2017 19:48

Dear Yulia,
I look forward to your first draft
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby GornayaJulia_MEPhI on Sun 17 Sep 2017 22:09

Здравствуйте, я начала работу над рефератом, буду благодарна за комментарии к начальной стадии работы. Ссылки на список используемой литературы пока не делала.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 18 Sep 2017 14:05

Dear Yulia,
Thank you for the first draft. Of course, referat by Diana Pyatiizbyanceva gave you good template, so your task will be now to offer further improvements. I put some small editorial comments in the attached file - underlined expressions without comment should be corrected.
Please go on with your work
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 4 Nov 2017 16:19

Dear Yulia,
My estimation of the early start of your work on referat was so high that I have put you 5- as the intermediate control mark, but to hold this level and even slightly improve it at the exam, you must finish and improve your text
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby GornayaJulia_MEPhI on Sun 17 Dec 2017 23:34

Good evening, I attach new version.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 22 Dec 2017 16:12

Dear Yulia,
My comments are in the attached file. Taking apart some stylistic errors and misprints, the essential points are:
1. Please numerate properly list of references: there cannot be 1.1, 1.2 or 1.3.
2. Please up-date information on experimental searches for SUSY at colliders and in cosmic rays.
3. Please explain, why SUSY impiies existence of two Higgs fields
You are rather close to the end of your work and I look forward to the corected version.
Please, let me know, whether you plan to attaend my course in the 2 semester
I use this occasion to wish you Merry Christmas and Happy new year.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby GornayaJulia_MEPhI on Thu 28 Dec 2017 14:21

Добрый день, я не успела учесть все ваши замечания, сейчас реферат в таком состоянии. Насчет второго семестра я пока не знаю. Также желаю Вам Счастливого Рождества и Нового года.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Thu 28 Dec 2017 19:07

Dear Yulia,
I started to check your version and found in the very beginning that numeration of references is still not corrected. So please, take into account all my comments and put on Forum your final version.
For the moment I cannot put you more than your previous intermediate control mark 5-, but you have all the chances to pretend on 5 at exam, if you take into account all my comments properly.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

New postby GornayaJulia_MEPhI on Sun 21 Jan 2018 17:19

Здравствуйте, прикрепляю новую версию
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