Referat and Exam of Gornaya Yulia

[GornayaJulia_MEPhI]

Dear Maxim Yu,,
I would like to choose the topic for the essay - SUSY(supersymmetry)

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Yulia,
I look forward to your first draft
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[GornayaJulia_MEPhI]

Здравствуйте, я начала работу над рефератом, буду благодарна за комментарии к начальной стадии работы. Ссылки на список используемой литературы пока не делала.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Yulia,
Thank you for the first draft. Of course, referat by Diana Pyatiizbyanceva gave you good template, so your task will be now to offer further improvements. I put some small editorial comments in the attached file - underlined expressions without comment should be corrected.
Please go on with your work
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Yulia,
My estimation of the early start of your work on referat was so high that I have put you 5- as the intermediate control mark, but to hold this level and even slightly improve it at the exam, you must finish and improve your text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[GornayaJulia_MEPhI]

Good evening, I attach new version.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Yulia,
My comments are in the attached file. Taking apart some stylistic errors and misprints, the essential points are:
1. Please numerate properly list of references: there cannot be 1.1, 1.2 or 1.3.
2. Please up-date information on experimental searches for SUSY at colliders and in cosmic rays.
3. Please explain, why SUSY impiies existence of two Higgs fields
You are rather close to the end of your work and I look forward to the corected version.
Please, let me know, whether you plan to attaend my course in the 2 semester
I use this occasion to wish you Merry Christmas and Happy new year.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[GornayaJulia_MEPhI]

Добрый день, я не успела учесть все ваши замечания, сейчас реферат в таком состоянии. Насчет второго семестра я пока не знаю. Также желаю Вам Счастливого Рождества и Нового года.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Yulia,
I started to check your version and found in the very beginning that numeration of references is still not corrected. So please, take into account all my comments and put on Forum your final version.
For the moment I cannot put you more than your previous intermediate control mark 5-, but you have all the chances to pretend on 5 at exam, if you take into account all my comments properly.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[GornayaJulia_MEPhI]

Здравствуйте, прикрепляю новую версию