Referat and Exam of Zherebtsova Elizaveta

[ESZherebtsova]

Dear Maxim Yu,,
I would like to choose the topic for the essay - PBH (Primordial black holes )

[Maxim Khlopov]

Thank you,
I look forward to your first draft
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[ESZherebtsova]

Dear Maxim Yu.,
It is the first variant of my referat. But during next week I plan to add more information and will upload it.

With best regards,Elizaveta.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Elizaveta,
Please find my comments in the attached file. Please edit carefully text translated by Google and correct stylistic errors and misprinted formulae as well as put missed formulae, Conclusions and Bibliography.
I highly estimate your use of literature beyond the lecture course, but some important points, considered in lectures, should be also discussed.
I look forward to your next version. Your intermediate control mark is 4+, but you have all the reasons to improve your mark at exam
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[ESZherebtsova]

Dear Maxim Yu., I upload text of the referat and correct it.
Could you, please, check and send for me edits, if it is needed.

With best regards, Elizaveta.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Elizaveta,
My comments are in the attached file. I have noticed with regret that some of my previous comments were not taken into account. All the papers, mentioned in text must be in the Bibliography. References should be in the proper form: journal, volume, pages. One simply cannot read Section 6 - it should be edited properly after Google translation.
To plan my successive work on your text I must know, whether you plan to attend my course in the 2 semester.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[ESZherebtsova]

Максим Ю., я отредактировала последнюю версию реферата в соответствии с комментариями. Но я не нашла какую именно вы имели ввиду статью Чечеткина ( я нашла у него только ограничения по нейтронным звездам), поэтому не добавила. Добавила только по другой статье ограничения. И по последней главе я поняла, что данная статья не так проста с точки зрения понимания, а следовательно и перевода, поэтому я убрала большую ее часть.
В следующем сесместре продолжать курс не планирую.
С уважением,Елизавета.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Elezaveta,
My comments are in the attached file. Please use to edit text after Google translation.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

PS Can I kindly ask you to inform other students that only those who pass all the iterations of their work on referats will be admitted to exam on 25 January.

[ESZherebtsova]

Здравствуйте, Максим Ю., я внесла новые правки.

Ребятам передала информацию.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Well, it's still not perfect (see attachement with underlined phrases and my brief comment}, but we have no time
for further accomplishement of the text.
Let's stop on that in our work
You are admitted to exam
M.Yu.Khlopov