by Maxim Khlopov on Mon 11 Jan 2016 23:04
Dear Ekaterina,
Thank you, it's a good first approximation
It's regrettful that we didn't start the work on your text two months ago.
My principal comments:
you miss
- expression for the probability of direct PBH formation on p=0 stage
- formation of supermassive PBHs from collapse of closed walls
I can recommend you to use my review
M.Yu.Khlopov
Primordial Black Holes. Res.Astron.Astrophys. (2010) V. 10, PP. 495-528,
e-Print: arXiv:arXiv:0801.0116
for a further extension of your text.
As soon as you add these points, we can discuss the details of your text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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