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Здравствуйте.
Я выбрала тему первичных черных дыр.

Thank you.
I look forward to the first draft

I must put marks of the intermediate control.
As I told you, I can put 3 for the chosen title, but to get higher mark I need
at least a first draft of referat.
I can wait until early next week for that
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Выкладываю первую версию своего реферата. В архиве лежит tex-файл для более удобной для Вас правки текста.

Dear Ekaterina,
Thank you, it's a good first approximation
It's regrettful that we didn't start the work on your text two months ago.
My principal comments:
you miss
- expression for the probability of direct PBH formation on p=0 stage
- formation of supermassive PBHs from collapse of closed walls
I can recommend you to use my review
M.Yu.Khlopov
Primordial Black Holes. Res.Astron.Astrophys. (2010) V. 10, PP. 495-528,
e-Print: arXiv:arXiv:0801.0116
for a further extension of your text.
As soon as you add these points, we can discuss the details of your text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

To plan our further work on the text, I also need the information, whether you plan to attend my course in the 2 semester
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Я добавила в реферат то, что Вы сказали. Спасибо большое за статью.
Касательно следующего семестра: да, я планирую продолжить слушать ваш курс.

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Хотелось получить какой-то отзыв на последнюю версию реферата.

Dear Ekaterina,
I repeat that our work would be much more effective, if you start it two months earlier.
You can find my comments in the attached file.
Please correct and send me the final Russian version of your referat to get admission to exam.
Since you plan to attend my course in the 2 semester, we can continue to work on your text, which should be presented in English to pass the exam in the 2 semester.
The specifics of the 2 semester is
-The course is given in English
-The referat should be presented in English
-The course is accomplished by several lectures on astroparticle physics by Prof. D.Semikoz
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич.
Высылаю версию реферата с учтенными вашими последними замечаниями.