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Максим Юрьевич, здравствуйте.
Я выбрал тему для реферата - primordial black holes

С Уважением, Александр Пантусов.

Thank you.
I look forward to a first draft
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич, вот первая версия реферата

Dear Alexander,
Thank you for draft.
Supermassive BH in AGNs should be mentioned in the Introduction
To have more detailed comments, please send me also doc file (together with pdf)
I strongly recommend you to take into account (and add to your Biblioigraphy) the following original papers and reviews enlisted below.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

O.K.Kalashnikov and M.Yu.Khlopov
On the possibility of checking the cosmology of asymptotically free SU(5)
theory. Phys. Lett. (1983), V. 127B, PP. 407-422.

M.Yu.Khlopov, B.A.Malomed and Ya.B.Zeldovich
Gravitational instability of scalar field and primordial black holes.
Mon. Not. Roy. astr. Soc., (1985), V. 215, PP.575-589.

A.F.Kadnikov, V.I.Maslyankin and M.Yu.Khlopov
Modelling of evolution of quasi-stellar systems, formed by particles and
antiparticles in early Universe. Astrofizika (1989), V.31, PP. 177-190.
[English translation: Astrophysics (1990) V. 31, no.1, P. 523]


FORMATION OF BLACK HOLES IN FIRST-ORDER PHASE TRANSITIONS AS A COSMOLOGICAL TEST
OF SYMMETRY-BREAKING MECHANISMS.
By R.V. Konoplich, S.G. Rubin, A.S. Sakharov, M.Yu. Khlopov (Moscow Phys. Eng.
Inst. & COSMION, Moscow & Moscow, IPM). 1999.
Published in Phys.Atom.Nucl.62:1593-1600,1999, Yad.Fiz.62:1705-1713,1999

PRIMORDIAL BLACK HOLES FROM NONEQUILIBRIUM SECOND ORDER PHASE TRANSITION.
By S.G. Rubin (COSMION, Moscow & Moscow Phys. Eng. Inst.), M.Yu. Khlopov
(COSMION, Moscow & Moscow Phys. Eng. Inst. &
Moscow, IPM), A.S. Sakharov (Zurich, ETH). May 2000. 8pp.
Published in Grav.Cosmol.S6:1-10,2000
e-Print Archive: hep-ph/0005271

FIRST-ORDER PHASE TRANSITIONS AS A SOURCE OF BLACK HOLES IN THE EARLY UNIVERSE.
By M.Yu. Khlopov, R.V. Konoplich, S.G. Rubin, A.S. Sakharov (COSMION, Moscow &
Moscow Phys. Eng. Inst. & Moscow, IPM & Zurich,
ETH). 2000.
Published in Grav.Cosmol.6:153-156,2000

D.Yu.Golubkov, Yu.A.Golubkov and M.Yu.Khlopov
Color emission by primordial black holes. Gravitation & Cosmology (2000),
V. 6, Supplement. PP. 101-106.

THE FORMATION OF PRIMARY GALACTIC NUCLEI DURING
PHASE TRANSITIONS IN
THE EARLY UNIVERSE.
By Sergei G. Rubin (Moscow Phys. Eng. Inst. & COSMION, Moscow), Alexander
S.Sakharov (Zurich, ETH), Maxim Yu. Khlopov (Moscow Phys. Eng. Inst. &
COSMION,Moscow & Moscow, IPM). Feb 2001. 9pp.
Published in J.Exp.Theor.Phys.91:921-929,2001,
J.Exp.Theor.Phys.92:921-929,2001
e-Print Archive: hep-ph/0106187

STRONG PRIMORDIAL INHOMOGENEITIES AND GALAXY FORMATION.
By M.Yu. Khlopov, S.G. Rubin (COSMION, Moscow & Moscow Phys. Eng.
Inst.), A.S. Sakharov (CERN & Zurich, ETH). CERN-TH-2002-033, Feb 2002.14pp.
Grav.&Cosmol., v.8, Suppl. 2002, pp.57-65
e-Print Archive: astro-ph/0202505

Primordial Structure of Massive Black Hole Clusters
by Maxim.Yu. Khlopov, Sergei.G. Rubin, Alexander.S. Sakharov
Astropart. Phys. (2005) V. 23, N-2, PP. 265-277.
Report-no: CERN-PH-TH/2004-004
e-Print Archive: astro-ph/0401532



M.Yu.Khlopov, A. Barrau and J. Grain
Gravitino production by Primordial Black Hole evaporation and constraints on
the inhomogeneity of the early Universe. Class. Quantum Grav. (2006) V. 23,
PP. 1875 -1882; e-Print Archive: astro-ph/0406621.

M.Yu.Khlopov
Primordial nonlinear structures and massive black holes from early Universe.
Journal of Physics. Conference series. (2007) V.66, P.012032 (10 pages). XXIX
Spanish relativity meeting (ERE2006)

M.Yu.Khlopov
Primordial Black Holes. Res.Astron.Astrophys. (2010) V. 10, PP. 495-528, e-Print: arXiv:arXiv:0801.0116
Constraints on PBHs on RD stage were discussed in

Ya.B.Zeldovich, A.A.Starobinsky, M.Yu.Khlopov and V.M.Chechetkin.
Primordial black holes and the problem of deuterium. Pis'ma Astron. Zh.
(1977) V. 3, PP. 208-211. [English translation: Sov. Astron. Lett. (1977), V. 3,
PP. 110-112]

V.M.Chechetkin, M.Yu.Khlopov, M.G.Sapozhnikov and Ya.B.Zeldovich
Astrophysical aspects of antiproton interaction with He (Antimatter in the
Universe). Phys. Lett. (1982), V. 118B, PP. 359-362.


V.M.Chechetkin, M.Yu.Khlopov and M.G.Sapozhnikov.
Antiproton interactions with light elements as a test of GUT cosmologies.
Rivista Nuovo Cimento (1982) , V. 5, N-10, PP. 1-80.

F.Balestra, G.Piragino, D.B.Pontecorvo, M.G.Sapozhnikov,
I.V.Falomkin, M.Yu.Khlopov
Annihilation of antiprotons with Helium-4 at low energies and
its relationship with the problems of the modern cosmology and
models of Grand Unification.
Yadernaya Fizika (1984) V. 39, PP. 990-997. [English translation:
Sov.J.Nucl.Phys. (1984) V.39, PP.626-631]

M.Yu.Khlopov and V.M.Chechetkin
Antiprotons in the Universe as a cosmological test of Grand Unification.
Fiz.Elem.Chastits At.Yadra (1987) V.18, PP. 627-677.
[English translation: Sov.J.Part.Nucl (1987) V. 18, PP. 267-288]


Yu.L.Levitan, I.M.Sobol, M.Yu.Khlopov and V.M.Chechetkin.
Production of light elements in cascades from energetic antiprotons in
early Universe and problems of nuclear cosmoarcheology. Yadernaya Fizika
(1988) V. 47, PP. 168-178.
[English translation: Sov.J.Nucl.Phys. (1988) V. 47, PP. 109-115]


M.Yu. Khlopov, Yu.L.Levitan, E.V.Sedelnikov and I.M.Sobol
Nonequilibrium cosmological nucleosynthesis of light elements:
Calculations by Monte Carlo method.
Yadernaya Fizika (1994) V. 57, PP. 1466-1470
[English translation: Phys.Atom.Nucl. (1994) V.57, PP.1393-1397]

E.V.Sedelnikov, S.S.Filippov and M.Yu. Khlopov
Kinetic theory of nonequilibrium cosmological nucleosynthesis. Yadernaya
Fizika (1995) V. 58, PP. 280-287.
[English translation: Phys.Atom.Nucl. (1995) V. 58, PP. 235-242]

Максим Юрьевич, вот второй вариант

Dear Alexander,
My comments are in the attached file.
Stylistic and grammatic errors are underligned, while the sign [???] means the necessity to clarify and correct the statement.
Bibliography should be extended
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Максим Юрьевич, вот третий вариант

Dear Alexander,
You should work on the academic style - on the 1 page some stylistic errors are underlined.
Cosmoparticle physics aspects should be stipulated in the Introduction, as well as the Bibliography should be extended (as I have proposed you earlier).
Happy new year to you
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич, хороших вам праздников, вот 4-ый вариант.

Dear Alexander,
For further work on your text I must know, whether you plan to attend my course in the second semester.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov