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Dear Kirill,
Thank you for your first draft of English text, which certainly should be improved.
I have underlined some expressions in the beginning of your text to be corrected and I hope that you improve your English in the next version
Recent discovery of gravitational waves sheds new light on the models of inflation -e.g. it may favor GUT energy scale of inflationary potential.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Hello, Maxim Yurievich.

Sending the topic with the corrected references.

Yours faithfully, Kirill.

Dear Kirill,
My comments are in the attached file.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Good day.

This is my next version of topic.

Regards, Kirill.

Dear Kirill,
My comments and corrections are in the attached file.
Please correct all the underlined expressions and terms.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Hello, Maxim Yu.

Sending correct version of my topic. Also sending pdf-version to solve display numbers in the list of references.

Regards, Kirill.

Dear Kirill,
Please, correct all the underlined expressions and terms. Please check grammar and don't forget verbs in sentences.
My corrections and comments are in the attached fie.
Regardds
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxim Yu.,

This is the next corrected version of referat.

Regards, Kirill

Dear Kirill,
I think that now we can stop improvement of your text, since we have no time for it.
So, you as all the other students are admitted to exam, but I reserve a possibility to ask additional questions on referat, if there are still some questions that are not clarified in its current version.
The consultation for my exam will be tomorrow, Wednesday 14 May at 10.30 Moscow time.
See you all soon
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopoov