Astroparticle Physics Forum COSMOVIA

Dear Maxim Yu.,

I would like to introduce at last the translated version of my referat.
There was a lot of work but now it's done.
I am look forward for your comments.

Best Regards,
Nikita Belyaev

Dear Nikita,
I have underlined words and terms, which should be corrected.
Please translate Russian references in English.
My corrections are in the attached file
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxim Yu.,

Please check the new version of my referat.
I tried to take into account all of your comments.
Also some additional misprints were corrected.

Best Regards,
Nikita Belyaev

Dear Nikita,
Thank you for your new draft.
Before I study your text thoroughly, I'll be much obliged to you to send me a version with the proper form of references.
Please add the data on volumes, pages of papers in journals and Publishers for books as marked in the attached text.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxim Yu.,

Thank you for your comments.
Here is the version with revised references.

Best Regards,
Nikita Belyaev

Dear Nikita,
My comments are in the attached file. If you use electronic translation, a very attentive editing of th etext is needed.
The expressions and terms to be corrected are underlined without comments.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxin Yu.,

Please take a look at the new version of my referat.
As for the renormalisation group analysis, I'm not sure that I've completely understood your position.
This is not a renormalisation theory book, I'm not sure that we need to place here a rigorous exposition of this analysis because this is huge material. However, I think now we have a nice amount of information which can illustrate the basic principles of the analysis and form more or less clean picture, isn't it?
I'm looking forward for your comments.

Best Regards,
Nikita Belyaev

Dear Nikita,
I think that now we can stop improvement of your text, since we have no time for it.
So, you as all the other students are admitted to exam, but I reserve a possibility to ask additional questions on referat, if there are still some questions that are not clarified in its current version.
In fact I have admired your intention to involve renormalization group analysis, but this part should be strongly edited - it would be sufficient to make proper referrence and present main result without extensive discussion of topics that are beyond the scope of your refereat
The consultation for my exam will be tomorrow, Wednesday 14 May at 10.30 Moscow time.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopoov