Astroparticle Physics Forum COSMOVIA

Good day,
Topic: Shadow matter with 2 generations of fermions.
Best regards, Daniil Ponomarenko

Dear Daniil,
I wait for a first version of your referat.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Good day!

I sending you the first "training" version of the abstract and would like to hear your comments on the style and structure of presentation, as well as the overall plan.
Unfortunately, I work in LaTex, so sending you a PDF file and (converted from *.tex) doc file for marking.

Sincerely, Daniil.

Dear Daniil,
My comments are in the attached file.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Good afternoon. I send you a new version with the corrected observations.

Needless to say, the educational aim of the abstract is clear to me, but whether this model to develop further? I mean that the model under the known physics (identified physical laws) is not viable at all and i can't invent mechanisms within the CM to address the obstacles encountered.

Anyway, looking forward to your comments.

Sincerely, Daniel

Dear Daniil,
To plan our further work on the text of your referat please inform whether you intend to attend my course in the second semester.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Good afternoon.
I don't plan to listen your course next semester.
Sincerely, Daniil.

Dear Daniil,
Thank you for your information.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Daniel,
I agree that you model is rather poor, so you must add some additional assumptions to make it more realistic.
My comments are in the attached file
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Good day.
Send you a new version of the abstract.
Sincerely, Daniil.