Referat and Exam of Ponomarenko Daniil

[PonomarenkoMEPHI]

Good day,
Topic: Shadow matter with 2 generations of fermions.
Best regards, Daniil Ponomarenko

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Daniil,
I wait for a first version of your referat.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[PonomarenkoMEPHI]

Good day!

I sending you the first "training" version of the abstract and would like to hear your comments on the style and structure of presentation, as well as the overall plan.
Unfortunately, I work in LaTex, so sending you a PDF file and (converted from *.tex) doc file for marking.

Sincerely, Daniil.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Daniil,
My comments are in the attached file.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[PonomarenkoMEPHI]

Good afternoon. I send you a new version with the corrected observations.

Needless to say, the educational aim of the abstract is clear to me, but whether this model to develop further? I mean that the model under the known physics (identified physical laws) is not viable at all and i can't invent mechanisms within the CM to address the obstacles encountered.

Anyway, looking forward to your comments.

Sincerely, Daniel

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Daniil,
To plan our further work on the text of your referat please inform whether you intend to attend my course in the second semester.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[PonomarenkoMEPHI]

Good afternoon.
I don't plan to listen your course next semester.
Sincerely, Daniil.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Daniil,
Thank you for your information.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Daniel,
I agree that you model is rather poor, so you must add some additional assumptions to make it more realistic.
My comments are in the attached file
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[PonomarenkoMEPHI]

Good day.
Send you a new version of the abstract.
Sincerely, Daniil.