Astroparticle Physics Forum COSMOVIA

Topic: Shadow matter with 4 generations of fermions

Dear Denis,
Thank you.
The earlier your prepare the first version of your referat, the more time we have to improve it (what is in your interest, since the quality of referat detrmines 70% of final mark at exam)
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте!

Извиняюсь за задержку по первой версии реферата.

Dear Denis,
My comments are in the attached file.
There is a lot of work to improve your referat.
To plan this work, please, let me know whether you plan to attend my course in the second semester.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте.

Спасибо за замечания. В следующем семестре не планирую продолжения прослушивания курса, из-за другой направленности научной работы.

С уважением,
Марков Денис

Dear Denis,
Thank you for information
Then we have not much time to improve the text, so we shouldn't lose time.
I wait for the revised version of your text according to the guidelines, given in my comments.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте Максим Юрьевич.

Вторая версия реферата.

С уважением,
Марков Денис

Dear Denis,
Please find my comments in the attached file.
For the moment your referat cannot be considered as even satisfactory
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Здравствуйте Максим Юрьевич.

Третья версия реферата.

С уважением,
Марков Денис

Dear Denis,
My comments in the attached file.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov