Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby MarkovDenisMIFI on Fri 10 Jan 2014 12:06

Здравствуйте Максим Юрьевич.

Четвертая версия реферата. Сомневаюсь правда по поводу правильности своих мыслей по поводу скрытой массы.
Жду замечаний.

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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 10 Jan 2014 12:46

Dear Denis,
My comments are in the attached file.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby MarkovDenisMIFI on Fri 10 Jan 2014 16:36

Здравствуйте Максим Юрьевич.

Очередная версия реферата.

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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 10 Jan 2014 18:32

Dear Denis,
I strongly recommend you to revise your text without rush, since bombardment me by new versions can only cause negative result.
You can consider two cases - 4th family in our world, then all the constraints you mention for 4th generation are valid and then to consider the case of 4th family in the mirror world.
Pease note that due to sphaleron transitions baryon asymmetry in the three light families can cause also asymmetry in the 4th family.
My other comments are in the attached text.
The underlined sentences should be corrected.
In particular, please, avoid the style of popular literature (as in the first paragraph of Introduction), you should use academic style as in scietific papers.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby MarkovDenisMIFI on Sat 11 Jan 2014 12:03

Здравствуйте Максим Юрьевич.

В версии реферата не стал делать разделение на наш мир и теневой, как вы писали в прошлом сообщении, оставил пока как есть. Постарался учесть ваши замечания, может не все удалось их исправить, поэтому хотелось бы услышать ваши комментарии.

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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 11 Jan 2014 19:44

Dear Denis,
Please take into account all my comments, both in the previous and this text of comments.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby MarkovDenisMIFI on Sun 12 Jan 2014 12:31

Здравствуйте Максим Юрьевич.

Версия реферата с учтенными замечаниями.

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Re: Referat and Exam of Denis Markov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 12 Jan 2014 12:45

Dear Denis,
Still you referat is far from ideal, but let's stop our work on that.
You are admitted to exam.
Please prepare answer to a question, additional to questions of your ticket:

Forms of dark matter objects in our Galaxy in the framework of your model (shadow stars of 1st shadow family, shadow objects of 4th family,...)
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Exam of Denis Markov 1 semester

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