Referat and Exam of Nikita Smirnov

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Re: Referat and Exam of Nikita Smirnov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 11 May 2014 17:57

Dear Nikita,
My comments are in the attached file. To facilitate my reading your text, can you put not only doc, but also pdf file.
The expressions and terms to be corrected are underlined.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Nikita Smirnov

New postby Nikita Smirnov MEPhI on Mon 12 May 2014 04:32

Dear Maxim Yu,
Here is corrected version of referat with pdf file as you requested.

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Re: Referat and Exam of Nikita Smirnov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 12 May 2014 17:20

Dear Nikita,
My comments are in the attached file.
Please be more attentive to grammar, style and to my comments to the previous version.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Nikita Smirnov

New postby Nikita Smirnov MEPhI on Wed 14 May 2014 02:33

Dear Maxim Yu,
Strangely your previous document with comments didn't have any underlined text.
I think I corrected everything you mentioned in this version.

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Re: Referat and Exam of Nikita Smirnov

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 14 May 2014 09:13

Dear Nikita
Thank you,
We'll discuss your referat tomorrow during exam
With the best regards
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