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Соина Люба, реферат and Exam

New postby Liuba Soina MEPhI on Tue 16 Oct 2012 19:35

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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 17 Oct 2012 15:27

Good afternoon,
Thank you for information.
I look forward to the first draft
With the best regards
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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Liuba Soina MEPhI on Tue 6 Nov 2012 16:16

Первая версия.
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New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 6 Nov 2012 16:47

Dear Lyuba,
Thank you for draft.
I cannot put my extensive comments in your pdf file, therefore, I can give you only brief remarks:
1. There should be few general sentences in Introduction, before you discuss the problems, which supesymmetry can solve. It would be useful to discuss not only MSSM, but also mention differnt types of nonminimal SUSY models.
2. Before Inflation and baryosynthesis it would be useful to describe physics, which provides their mechanisms
3. After Inflation and baryosynthesis you can mention possible probes for their mechanisms (my tomorrow's lecture can be helpful)
4. Please correct missprints in the text (missed letters in some words)
5. When you discuss axino effects of axions should be also mentioned
6. It would be better to change the title
Экспериментальное ограничение суперсимметрии.
by Космомикрофизика суперсимметричных моделей and to stipulate the combination of physical, astrophysical and cosmological methods of its probes. Recent results of SUSY searches at LHC should be discussed.
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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Liuba Soina MEPhI on Mon 26 Nov 2012 23:06

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич!
Выкладываю вторую исправленную версию реферата. Надеюсь, хуже не стало. Вы в предыдущем посте писали про недавние эксперименты в ЦЕРНе, имеется в виду обнаружение бозона, похожего на бозон Хиггса?
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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 5 Dec 2012 14:26

Dear Lyuba,
Thank you for draft.
It would be helpful for future work, if you put your text as doc and not docx file.
Please take into account my earlier remarks:
1. There should be few general sentences in Introduction about the genral idea and necessity of SUSY, before you discuss the problems, which supesymmetry can solve.
2. Before Inflation and baryosynthesis it would be useful to describe physics, which provides their mechanisms.
I had in mind seafrch for SUSY partners at LHC as the excperimental test of SUSY models
More detailed comments and corrections are in the attached file
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New postby Liuba Soina MEPhI on Mon 24 Dec 2012 13:29

Третья версия.
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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 2 Jan 2013 16:01

Dear Lyuba,
You should correct your style - some stylistic errors are noted in the attached file, as well as my comments.
For further improvement of your text I also need information, whether you plan to take my cours ein the 2 semester, or not.
Please let me know about your plans.
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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Liuba Soina MEPhI on Fri 11 Jan 2013 03:43

Здравствуйте, Максим Юрьевич!
Насчёт курса я ещё подумаю, попозже напишу.
Исправленная версия:
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Re: Соина Люба, реферат

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 11 Jan 2013 17:07

Dear Lyuba,
Please correct the text, following my comments in the attached file and put the final version of your referat in order to be admitted to exam.
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