by Maxim Khlopov on Fri 26 Oct 2012 12:42
Dear Alexandra,
Of course, I highly estimate your being first with the first draft, but, unfortunately, you still only at the beginning of your work and the cosmologically meaningful predictions of your model as well as the corresponding scenario are practically absent.
If you want me to make comments and offer corrections in the text of your work, it would be useful to send me doc file of your text.
For the moment you have a well deserved "4" as an intermediate control mark.
If you want more, you should offer a second version before the deadline, which is extended until Monday
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
[i]Хлопов Максим Юрьевич
Maxim Khlopov[/i]