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New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 16 Apr 2011 18:32

Dear Larisa,
In addition to my corrections - you should say that the main problem of calculation of abundances of anomalous isotopes in the composite dark matter model is in the nuclear physics of OHe, which is only in the process of its development.
If you can make rough estimations, it would be great
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Larisa_MEPhI on Mon 18 Apr 2011 20:42

Maxim Yur'evich!
I tried to take into account all your corrections for exeption the last one (here). Continue working
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 19 Apr 2011 00:48

Dear Larisa,
Please find in attachement text with my corrections;
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Larisa_MEPhI on Sun 24 Apr 2011 13:46

Good day, Maxim Yur'evich!
I have tried to consider all your comments.
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 24 Apr 2011 14:50

Dear Larisa,
It is close to the end but not final:
Please find my comments in the attached file
editorial corrections - please choose a unique notation for OHe, O^-- and S_3 (or S_2)
essential - please use correct explanation for DAMA result in O-helium model (see lecture on Dark Atoms or latest papers)
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 24 Apr 2011 15:02

Dera Larisa,
To facilitate your search for correct explanation of DAMA signal, please use the results of
http://arxiv.org/PS_cache/arxiv/pdf/1011/1011.4586v1.pdf
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Larisa_MEPhI on Sun 24 Apr 2011 20:27

I was trying to do my best. I believe I correct all Your marks
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 24 Apr 2011 22:12

Dear Larisa,
I can uderstand your wish to conclude, but still there remain:
stylistic correction - you can cut all the details about explanation of DAMA signal - it is not essential for your aims
essential - you should be careful: numbers in Ch.2 were obtained for S_3=m/1TeV, while in Ch.4 for S_2=m/100 GeV.
If you change S_3 by S _2 in Ch. 2 you should re-calculate numerical factors in rexpressions.
I look forward to a really final version
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Larisa_MEPhI on Mon 25 Apr 2011 09:00

Maxim Yur'evich!
I thought about your corrections right after I've downloaded to You my last version.
I believe, this is it.
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Re: реферат Коротковой Ларисы

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 25 Apr 2011 12:36

Dear Larisa,
Your referat is accepted with my small editorial corrections, made
in the attached file.
You are admitted to exam.
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