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Neizvestnyh Leonid

New postPosted: Mon 21 Jun 2010 09:33
by Neizvestnyh
Реферат

Re: Neizvestnyh Leonid

New postPosted: Wed 23 Jun 2010 18:50
by Konstantin Belotsky
Леонид
было бы хорошо, если бы вы проработали текст, исключив лишнее. В рамках вашего реферата необходимо еще включить обсуждение проблемы скрытой массы, инфляции и бариосинтеза. В качестве помощи можете использовать материал по суперсимметрии.
Всего хорошего
КБ

Re: Neizvestnyh Leonid

New postPosted: Fri 25 Jun 2010 19:08
by Maxim Khlopov
Dear Leonid,
In addition to the comment by K.M.Belotsky I send you attached your text with my comments.
All the underlined sentences should be removed and you should use proper form of referat: title list, Introduction, Chapters, Conclusion and Bibliography.
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Re: Neizvestnyh Leonid

New postPosted: Thu 1 Jul 2010 01:06
by Neizvestnyh
Исправил и дополнил реферат.

Re: Neizvestnyh Leonid

New postPosted: Thu 1 Jul 2010 11:02
by Maxim Khlopov
Dear Leonid,
I would prefer text of your own though you prefered uncritical reproduction of my book. In some cases you reproduce old results, e.g. about zero cosmological term.
It was not reasonable to discuss the thingns that are not precisely related with your topic - the relationship between your model and axions is not clarified
My comments are in the attached text
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov