Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Anastasia_Kirichenko on Wed 23 Feb 2022 08:13

Put the report
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Anastasia_Kirichenko on Wed 23 Feb 2022 08:15

Dear M.Yu., I need some comments for progress of my work
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 27 Feb 2022 11:41

Dear Anastasia,
I have prepared the set of detailed comments to your text, but it was lost. Not to repeat them, I put in attachement the saved copy with beginning of my comments. The main point - you should elaborate academic style - not the style of popular articles. Each statement should have quantitative proof. I can give more comments at our meeting on 2 March
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Anastasia_Kirichenko on Sun 27 Feb 2022 11:46

Thank you, it will be so useful for me. Then I will wait 2march.
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Thu 3 Mar 2022 19:25

Dear Anastasia,
Please correct your text following our today's discussion and from the viewpoint of making your text as much academic, as possible
I look forward to the corrected draft
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Anastasia_Kirichenko on Fri 4 Mar 2022 20:32

Dear MYu, I did some corrections, but with some of your comments i don't agree. We will discuss it tomorrow.
Thank you for your help.
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 4 Mar 2022 20:45

Dear Anastasia,
Thank you for draft. Let's discuss it tomorrow
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Anastasia_Kirichenko on Sat 19 Mar 2022 17:30

Dear M.Yu.,
Good evening, i made some correction for report
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Re: Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 20 Mar 2022 15:56

Dear Anastasia,
thank you for draft.
Please find my comments to your first page - just to give you idea, how we should work on the text of your Master thesis.
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Exam of Kirichenko Anastasia

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 23 Mar 2022 18:20

The record of exam of Anastasia Kirichenko
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