Exam and Small Thesis of Kirichenko Anastasia

[Anastasia_Kirichenko]

Put the report

[Anastasia_Kirichenko]

Dear M.Yu., I need some comments for progress of my work

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Anastasia,
I have prepared the set of detailed comments to your text, but it was lost. Not to repeat them, I put in attachement the saved copy with beginning of my comments. The main point - you should elaborate academic style - not the style of popular articles. Each statement should have quantitative proof. I can give more comments at our meeting on 2 March
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Anastasia_Kirichenko]

Thank you, it will be so useful for me. Then I will wait 2march.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Anastasia,
Please correct your text following our today's discussion and from the viewpoint of making your text as much academic, as possible
I look forward to the corrected draft
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Anastasia_Kirichenko]

Dear MYu, I did some corrections, but with some of your comments i don't agree. We will discuss it tomorrow.
Thank you for your help.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Anastasia,
Thank you for draft. Let's discuss it tomorrow
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Anastasia_Kirichenko]

Dear M.Yu.,
Good evening, i made some correction for report

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Anastasia,
thank you for draft.
Please find my comments to your first page - just to give you idea, how we should work on the text of your Master thesis.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

The record of exam of Anastasia Kirichenko

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