Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Shlepkina ES MIFI on Wed 10 Apr 2019 12:47

Dear, Maxim Yuryevich!
I put the first version of my small thesis.
Sorry to post my work so late. I wanted to finish it completely before showing you. Waiting for your comments and corrections.
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 16 Apr 2019 18:48

Dear Ekaterina,
Thank you for a very good first approximation.
My comments are in the attached files - dominantly editorial comments and grammar corrections
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Shlepkina ES MIFI on Sat 11 May 2019 19:05

Dear Maxim Yurevich!
Could you, please,advise me articles or other materials on phase transitions in the universe?
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 12 May 2019 12:26

Dear Ekaterina,
I can recommend you the most recent review
A. Mazumdar and G. White, Rep. Prog. Phys. (2019) in press , preprint arXiv:1811.01948
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Shlepkina ES MIFI on Tue 14 May 2019 21:53

Dear Maxim Yurevich,
My second version in attached file
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 15 May 2019 16:02

Dear Ekaterina,
Thank yo u. My comments are in the attached file. Please, pay special attention to the proper forms of references in the Bibliography.
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New postby Shlepkina ES MIFI on Sat 8 Jun 2019 16:19

Dear Maxim Yurevich!
I put next version of my thesis. I tried to take into account all your comments and corrections.
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 8 Jun 2019 16:43

Dear Ekaterina,
Still some small corrections, marked red in the attached file, should be made in the text and references to finish our work
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Shlepkina ES MIFI on Sun 9 Jun 2019 10:49

Dear Maxim Yurevich!
I made corrections in my text that you indicated
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Re: Small Thesis and exam of Shlepkina Ekaterina

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 9 Jun 2019 12:58

Dear Ekaterina,
Thank you
Let's stop on that. You are admitted to exam. The new tickets (they are only slightly modified as compared with the previous year are on Forum.
there are also two additional tasks by Prof. M.Bucher in a separate post
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