Small thesis and exam of Steve Branchu

[steve_branchu]

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections.

Best regards

Steve

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Steve,
My comments are in the attached file.
There references should be corrected properly
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[steve_branchu]

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections. I wrote in the bibliography the informations about volume and the pages in the same format.

Best regards

Steve

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Steve,
Still there are left some stylistic errors, marked in the text as well as not all references are properly corrected (see the attached file).
I look forward to the final improved version to admit you to exam
With the best regards
Maxim Khlopov

[steve_branchu]

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections. Thank you very much for your help and all your advices.

Best regards

Steve

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Steve,
Some comments are in the attached file. To pretend on excellent mark you should add your original results of studies of WtCDM model.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[steve_branchu]

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with my last corrections. I move the portion about the different types of dark matter from the introduction to the second section.

Best regards

Steve

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Steve,
In the attached file you'll find my corrections and questions to the mathematical problem you solve.
I have not found terms corresponding to OHe-proton scattering, which is responsible for OHe coupling to plasma
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[steve_branchu]

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections.

Best regards

Steve

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Steve,
You have evidently earned admission to exam, but more work is needed for a next step - to prepare a paper with your original results. Probably, we should discuss them in VIA during your exam. My comment about them is in the attached file
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov