Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby dkoshele_MEPhI on Thu 6 Apr 2017 02:41

Dear Maxim Yurievich,
I'll work on my essay about Little Higgs model but I want to upgrade it. I think it'll be very advisable for me to consider not only LH but some other SM extensions as a field of dark matter searching. What do you think about it?
You can find my first draft in the attachment.

Sincerely,
Daria.
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 10 Apr 2017 21:01

Dear Daria,
Thank you for draft. You deserve excellent intermediate control mark.
I can only greet your idea to extend the topic.
My comments and corrections are in the attached file.
I marked yellow the expressions that need correction, sometime I propose possible corrections
I look forward to a new version
With the bets regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby dkoshele_MEPhI on Tue 9 May 2017 19:36

Dear Maxim Yurievich,
I've finished a part about little Higgs. Could you please check it? After that, I'm going to extend my referat with the sterile neutrino model.
Thank you!

Sincerely,
Daria.
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Wed 10 May 2017 14:35

Dear Daria,
Thank you, my comments are in the attached file. Please translate into English Russian paragraphs and references.
I look forward to the full version of your text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby dkoshele_MEPhI on Sat 20 May 2017 18:04

Dear Maxim Yurievich,
here is my next referat's draft. I tried to take into account all your comments.
Also, a section about sterile neutrinos was added. It's not a final version and I'm going to expand it with an astronomical observation.

Thank for your review,
Sincerely,
Daria.
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 20 May 2017 22:21

Dear Daria,
Thank you.
My comments are in the attached file. Evident misprints are marked yellow
I look forward to the final version of your text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby dkoshele_MEPhI on Mon 22 May 2017 01:03

Dear Maxim Yurievich,
thank you for your comments! I've tried to take all of them into account.

Sincerely,
Daria.
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 22 May 2017 15:18

Dear Daria,
Thank you. My comments are in the attached file. You have definitely deserved 5 as intermediate control mark and I look forward to the final version of your text to admit you to exam
With the best regards
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby dkoshele_MEPhI on Tue 23 May 2017 00:07

Dear Maxim Yurievich,
Thank you!
Here is my next version. I hope I fixed all the mistakes and shortcomings.
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Re: Referat and exam of Daria Koshelenko

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 23 May 2017 13:04

Dear Daria,
Thank you. My only comment is Bibliography: Journal reference should be:
Journal, volume, pages, year
Book references should be not only Author(s) and title, but also Publishing company, its country and year
As soon as you correct Bibliography we can finish the work on your text.
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