Referat and Exam of Esipova Ekaterina

[Esipova_E_MEPhI]

Theme of my referat is "Primordial black holes".

[Maxim Khlopov]

Thank you.
I hope it will not be a problem to put the English translation of your Russian text on this subject.
Please take into account my comments to your Russian text
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Esipova_E_MEPhI]

Hello,
This is the first version of my referat.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Dear Ekaterina,
Your text is nearly close to final, but still it contains a lot of stylistic and grammatic errors.
I have marked some of them, but please check the text more attentively to exclude missed ''of'' or sentences with noun in plural and verb in singular.
I look forward to the corrected version
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Esipova_E_MEPhI]

Hello,
I took into account your remarks and corrected my referat.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Thank you, it is close to final version.
Still small corrections are needed - please check that you didn't miss ''of'' and that you have removed '','' before ''that''.
I look forward to your final version
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Esipova_E_MEPhI]

I hope that I don't miss any mistakes now.

[Maxim Khlopov]

Indeed, you didn't.
You are admitted to exam
See you in VIA on Wednesday.
As an additional question to the questions of ticket can you prepare a brief review of your analysis of 4th generation neutrino -OHe recombination
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

[Maxim Khlopov]

Record of exam by Esipova Ekaterina, which she passed with excellent mark