by Maxim Khlopov on Sat 18 Apr 2015 19:27
Dear Tatiana,
My comments are in the attached file.
The sentences and phrases, in which Grammar of stylistic corrections are needed, are underlined.
Please add discussion of shadow objects, predicted in your model (most probably you'll have large He/p ratio in your shadow matter, what should influence the structure and evolution of your shadow stars).
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov
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