Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Liudmila_Borodikhina on Mon 30 Mar 2015 23:29

Hello! The first version of my referat is in the attachment
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 6 Apr 2015 14:22

Dear Liudmila,
Thank you for draft, but it contained so many slips that I could hardly go further than the firt papge.
Can I ask you to check your text more attentively
My first comments are in the attachement
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Liudmila_Borodikhina on Sun 19 Apr 2015 21:48

Hello! New version of my referat is in attachment
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 20 Apr 2015 16:22

Dear Liudmila,
Thank you for draft.
My comments are in the attached file.
The sentences and phrases to be corrected are underlined.
Please use the term "mirrority"
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Liudmila_Borodikhina on Sun 26 Apr 2015 23:41

Hello!
Thank you for your remarks.
The third version of my draft is in attachment.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 27 Apr 2015 15:43

Dear Liudmila,
I started to check your new version and found with regret that there are no corrections, which I have proposed to you earlier. Please prepare the new version with the account of all my previous remarks.
In particular change "specularity" by "mirrority".
I have underlined the experessions and phrases to be corrected in the attached file
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Liudmila_Borodikhina on Sun 3 May 2015 17:27

I`m sorry! It was my mistake.
The new version is in attached file.

Best regards!
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 4 May 2015 10:07

Dear Liudmila,
I started to read your new vesion and found with regret that I have to make the same corrections, which I have already did in the previous variant.
I'll be much obliged to you to be more attentive to my comments.
The small thesis shoud start with a title page - see thesises of our studnets.
The Universe is normally written with a capital U.
Please pay attention to my comments in the attached file
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Liudmila_Borodikhina on Sat 9 May 2015 20:18

Hello!
It`s my new version of referat
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Re: Referat and Exam of Borodikhina Liudmila

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 9 May 2015 21:41

Dear Liudmila,
Unfortunately the version is not new, since I can only repeat my previous comments - there is no title page, "specular" instead of "mirrority" etc.
So I can hardly consider this version as close to the final.
Some comments in the attached file.
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