Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 3 May 2015 13:01

Dear Anastasia,
Here are my comments attached.
The correct spelling is "baryosynthesis"
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Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Nastya Kurova MEPhI on Sun 3 May 2015 18:08

Sorry for multiple mistypes. I should be more careful. Here is corrected version.
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Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 4 May 2015 09:47

Dear Aqnastasia,
Taking apart some necessary stylistic corrections not "freedom degrees" but "degrees of frredom", not Universe expasion'", but "expansion of the Universe" there are some essential points, which you can find in the attached file.
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Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Nastya Kurova MEPhI on Mon 4 May 2015 13:33

Good afternoon!
I've tried to consider all your remarks. Please find attached new version.
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Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 4 May 2015 14:03

Dear Anastasia,
My small corections are in the attached file.
As soon as you make them, I think we can stop our work on your text (though it is not ideal, we don't have any more time for its improvement)
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Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Nastya Kurova MEPhI on Mon 4 May 2015 16:22

Thank you for all the corrections. Here is the final version.
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Re: Exam and referat of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Thu 7 May 2015 16:03

Dear Anastasia,
You are admitted to exam
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Presentation of small thesis by Anastsia Kurova

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 10 May 2015 17:40

Presentation of small thesis by Anastsia Kurova
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Exam of Anastsia Kurova

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Mon 11 May 2015 14:56

The exam was passed with excellent mark.
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