Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby DenisKuznetsovMEPhI on Mon 2 Mar 2015 13:32

The theme of my referat is "Mirror world with mn=mp" (as in previous semester)
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Tue 3 Mar 2015 19:23

Thank you,
I look forward to your first draft
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby DenisKuznetsovMEPhI on Mon 13 Apr 2015 11:42

Maxim Yurievich, good day. Here is the first version of my english referat. I had no practice in translation from Russian for a long time so excuse me for my possible grammar mistakes. Waiting for your comments
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Fri 17 Apr 2015 14:55

Dear Denis,
Thank you for draft;
My comments and corrections are in the attached file.
Please note that the abreviation for centimeters is cm.
The sentences and phrases to be corrected are underrlined.
Please adress my questions in comments
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby DenisKuznetsovMEPhI on Mon 4 May 2015 19:53

Good evening. Tried to take into account your comments and correct mistakes
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Thu 7 May 2015 16:14

Dear Denis,
My comments are in the attached file.
The main point is:
Please, use semi-empirical Weizsaecker’s formula to compare binding energies of He-4 and 4n (tetra-neutron) in your model and of D and 2n, to check that the path of nucleosynthesis is correct.
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby DenisKuznetsovMEPhI on Sat 9 May 2015 20:27

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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sat 9 May 2015 20:57

Dear Denis,
still it's not the final version.
My comments are in the attached file - please read attentively your text.
The part with Weizsaecker's formula should be before nucleosynthesis
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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby DenisKuznetsovMEPhI on Sat 9 May 2015 21:57

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Re: Referat and Exam of Kuznetsov Denis

New postby Maxim Khlopov on Sun 10 May 2015 11:02

Dear Denis,
The result on D is really strange.
let's stop on that.
You are admitted to exam
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