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Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections.

Best regards

Steve

Dear Steve,
My comments are in the attached file.
There references should be corrected properly
Regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections. I wrote in the bibliography the informations about volume and the pages in the same format.

Best regards

Steve

Dear Steve,
Still there are left some stylistic errors, marked in the text as well as not all references are properly corrected (see the attached file).
I look forward to the final improved version to admit you to exam
With the best regards
Maxim Khlopov

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections. Thank you very much for your help and all your advices.

Best regards

Steve

Dear Steve,
Some comments are in the attached file. To pretend on excellent mark you should add your original results of studies of WtCDM model.
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with my last corrections. I move the portion about the different types of dark matter from the introduction to the second section.

Best regards

Steve

Dear Steve,
In the attached file you'll find my corrections and questions to the mathematical problem you solve.
I have not found terms corresponding to OHe-proton scattering, which is responsible for OHe coupling to plasma
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov

Dear Maxim, this is my referat with the last corrections.

Best regards

Steve

Dear Steve,
You have evidently earned admission to exam, but more work is needed for a next step - to prepare a paper with your original results. Probably, we should discuss them in VIA during your exam. My comment about them is in the attached file
With the best regards
M.Yu.Khlopov